It's Ok (F*ck)
by @jamesacop
NSFWLiner Notes
Song addendum: I added vocals and made a real title at 8 am after reading @pumpkinhead's kind comment :)
Idk what this is. I was kinda pissed off and just started hitting the guitar really hard. Might've ripped off the Strokes a bit. Who cares... that’s what Fawm is all about really.
Lyrics
Ruminate Separating your feelings From me
Dissipate Run away from the hard things I'm sorry
I forget You forget It’s okay
Running farther away Try to stop me Catch me if you can Or if you want It’s okay
Comments
I can definitely feel some rough edges here, probably coming from anger and a slight sense of going off the rails but overall it has a solid structure and a very clear atmosphere. What I find most interesting is that it lasts less than a minute and a half, yet it still feels complete and enough. I might have rounded off the ending a bit more, but that slightly ‘I don’t care’ vibe definitely comes through this way
Great start to a song...who cares if it's ripped off, it rips.
I heard the Melody and the lyrics in my head. Please add them. ❤️
Thanks for the advice... just needed a clear head!
What a lovely little angry song! Title is perfect too.