"Vision" ( x Ray)

by @silentmonkey

NSFW Skirmish: X-ray (@atornberg)
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Lyrics

3 -line '17's' TBC (part 1) (( x Ray )) The TV repair lass laid out some ground rules before doing her job. / "I'm just not prepared" Ray confessed. I wasn't going to disagree. / Her ladder was as wobbly as fuk, her stocking mask quite put me off. / And her whistlin' Beyonce' was like inviting baying wolves for tea. / "I can't do the work" Ray went on "with no sounds at full wak in me lugs." / My heart sank - Glasto _mudbank_fash. I was about to send her packing / but she's fraught, pointin' down: "Look", she say "exorcists hit Badness first up. / Giselle, Sky channels, Max Richter mashups ?right, 'til picture's a-clearin'. / And then Goodness flow in. Y'know wot i'm talkin'. I'm talkin' Baroque . . " . . (TBC)

Comments

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I am slightly confused, but also intrigued in a good way by your lyrics. Some lovely lines in there and an interesting take on the prompt

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Ta muchly Gordon - a fine & quick response. "Confused" okay. 3 lines, 17 beats ; a "narrative haiku" form I call it - a personal quirk - and something I oft employ when writing under constraint.

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