Musings of Achilles' Death

by @ayais

Liner Notes

The guy died. It wasn't pretty.

#Achillesdeath

Lyrics

After all that, the death of his love The death of his brother, the death of another Then another and another and another and another

Youth took his heart, then took his all Even before the arrow and fall He fell to the floor, a cup from the shelf

Comments

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i believe achilles was an only child, and patroclus, who was killed because he was wearing achilles armor, was a mere companion., i am at a loss trying to figure out who is who in this song.

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@ayais

You're right. It should say 'her' brother. He's talking to Polyxena. This is a draft that will get corrected. Good catch. Thanks.

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If only Patroclus hadn't stolen that armor. Very nice job with this one.

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