When I'm with You
by @alyak72
Skirmish: Hangover (@robinleaf)
Liner Notes
Pop Punk jam. Enjoyed this one and kinda shocked I kept to the hour this time. Gotta line up some stuff a bit better later on. Everything by me.
Lyrics
Why should I spend the day with you When every time you always act a fool Like that time at the diner when you threw a menu Or that time at the library when you screamed because you book was overdue
Why should I spend the day with you When every time I always do I feel hungover I feel so hungover when I've been with you x2
And honestly you're getting exhausting And honestly what have I been thinking I know the ship is sinking x2 Cause even when I'm not drinking I feel hungover
Why should I spend the day with you When every time I always do I feel hungover I feel so hungover when I've been with you x2
Comments
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Really nice skirmish! The production sounds great! It's impressive how much you're able to write and record in an hour. Love the throwback style for sure! That chorus melody is great! With a little more time on it, I can see you finishing this one out! I'd put it in my playlist for sure!
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Rock and Roll! This takes me back to the early 2000s, alright. Makes me wanna order pizza and drink a surge, lol.
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Oh yeah...I enjoyed this a lot! Punk isn't my usual genre but this was cool (maybe I should listen to punk more). Lyrically, I like where you went with the prompt; it fits perfectly for the sentiment you are conveying. Well, I have to head for the library now and will take your advice not to scream 😀
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Love the groove(played everything,eh?! Wow), great hook. Honest emotion and storytelling always win. Fantastic skirmish.
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This has got the best energy. It’s that moment when you realise that it’s not worth the effort. Great skirmish.
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Whoa, this is great! Listened twice. Really well written, esp. love "i know ship is sinking...even when I'm not drinking". And LOVE how you set the bad behavior scenes at the diner/library. Really enjoyed this!!
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Thank you! I work at a library and have seen some shit...
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This is so tight and wonderful. Great take on the skirmish that a person can make you as hungover as a drink might. Great vocals, great ending. hope you keep this one.