I Don't Know What To Tell You Baby

by @charlie_leemburg

Skirmish: Write a song using only 1... (@nightwing521)
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Liner Notes

Better to do difficult words or simple words?

Lyrics

I don't know what to tell you baby Maybe you can tell me? I don't know what to tell you baby Maybe you can tell me?

I tell you, maybe I know You tell me, I don't know baby Maybe, I know what to tell you Maybe, I tell you I know

I don't know what to tell you baby Maybe you can tell me? I don't know what to tell you baby Maybe you can tell me?

Tell me I don't know what you know Baby, I know I don't know Maybe I know you know what I don't know I know you don't know what you know

I don't know what to tell you baby Maybe you can tell me? I don't know what to tell you baby Maybe you can tell me?

Maybe I tell baby I don't know Maybe you can maybe tell me what you know I don't know what you can tell me But baby, maybe I know

Comments

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I loved how you told a story by rearranging the same words. I think this would sound really cool set to music!

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Congrats on hitting the prompt but telling a full story, this is wonderful!

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This does have a blues cadence to it. Just seems to plead, in that way. Clever rearranging of words!

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Ha, I got a bluesy feel as well. But also (in a fun way!) an English language exercise.

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This is great! Feels like a perfect blues tune. Excellent way to approach the challenge. I wish I had thought of it.

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