Beef

by @mardeycranbleson

Skirmish: Secret Beef (@melodic)

Lyrics

secret beef and you call my name i dont think i would be the same and i and you know that im not in love tonight tonight if i ever was tonight

secret beef when you're not around and you know that i feel so down and i never brave enough to call again now bereft of my only friend and I"m

secret beef when we had a dance secret beef give me one more chance tonight secret beef denigrate this life you agree that we're all alive tonight

Comments

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Love the melody and the edgy muffled vocal is so cool with this groove. And the 'secret beef' lyrical motif just works.

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Love this vibe! Nice instrumentals! And the mystery of who/what is the secret beef. Fun!!

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@fantex

Groovy and you got sweet on the keys!

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Secret beef is an intriguing hook! I love the flow of the music, lovely keys. Great upbeat feel to the song.

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I love how I have no idea what this is about. Or not NO idea, but there is loads of room left to wonder about it. There is definitely a kind of angsty mood - things are not good. I just can't tell if it's rejection or shame or the feeling of simply being too crap to live. And all of that utterly relateable. Love it.

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Love the title (and now see its a skirmish so will go a listen to others as well) I love how you have used the prompt to tell the story. The distorted vocals work well and the almost honky tonk piano is a nice contrast.

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Nice piano soloing, cool arrangement. I like the saturated vocal. Nice take on the prompt

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