Eye On The Ball
Liner Notes
#indie #post-punk #full-production #stereorama This started way different and I scrapped a lot of work. It just changed in my mind so I dunno, it's kinda weird. I guess it's about not feeling trapped by negativity...
Lyrics
don't take your eye off the ball keep on standing up tall clear your mind of the the trash while you're waiting for the crash
wallowing in the dregs at the bottom of the barrel biting ankles of the legs all the dogs have gone ferrel
like symbiotic disease super spreading super fast contagious negativity its all encompassing
don't take your eye off the ball keep on standing up tall clear your mind of the the trash while you're waiting for the crash
You don’t have to feel trapped
like symbiotic disease super spreading super fast contagious negativity its all encompassing
Comments
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Thank you :) I think the way I ended it is a bit too big but, ah live n learn. It was a fun exercise in tension and release.
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I like the theme of this song and I very much enjoyed my listen. It's strange how hard we can be on ourselves.
I am glad! Sometimes I get stuck in negative loops, especially when I was younger. Now I have tools that help... like making music! have to purge those feelings with something constructive, in my opinion.
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if this turned up in a Deezer playlist I would definitely safe it to listen again and again. I really like the 2 different vocals overlapping. Great tune.
I'm not even sure what Deezer is! Thank you though, I'm curious now. I am a fan of lyrical rows. They are fun but don't always work.. I gave it a shot!
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Dig the 2 guitars line's interaction - same with the 2 vocal lines intermittently - it is a whole ride. Slightly off-balance, in a good way. And it sounds great.
Thanks! Maybe a weird choice but, I think I was going for different on this.
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Very groovy. I like the varied vocal parts, and the base line is awesome. Nice job