Waiting

by @slyeli

Liner Notes

This was the first song I wrote in February but it's taken me till now to record a version of it. It's really simple but for some reason I just couldn't remember the lyrics when playing it.

#dark #synth #guitar

Lyrics

I’m waiting For you to come home again I’m waiting But I’ll never see you again And I don’t leave my bedroom Cos all I have left is your scent

I’m waiting But my hope is bloodied and grim I’m waiting The walls have begun to close in And the photos are fading But still I refuse to give in

Cos I can’t escape The rats in the walls Pulling my strings And chewing my soul

I’m waiting And my hair is starting to thin I’m waiting 10 years lost to a sin And there’s no point in fighting There’s nothing left for me to win

Comments

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Woah, wow. This is so hauntingly lovely. Really made me slow down and take it all in. The lyrics and forlorn synth pulses under that (fantastic sounding) guitar! A beautiful dirge.

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Very beautiful first line, love the high note. The beat is so forlorn almost like a funeral dirge. This sounds really cool. Love the added guitar too it gives a little bit of levity to otherwise quite profound mood.

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Love the higher notes for the waiting, gives a real structure to it. There is an atmospheric 'droning' quality to this which is quite hypnotic. The final couplet with the 'nothing left for me to win' is great.

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