Float

by @mattlitzinger

Liner Notes

Lyrics

I was trying to fight the waves Wearing myself out Day after day

Then I lightened up the load Let go of everything Weighing me down

Now I'm floating on the water Cause I learned to stop fighting the fear My body's feeling lighter Cause I've got new breath in my lungs

When the sky is turning gray The thunder clouds roll I can't see the shore

My hands are reaching out The less I have to hold The more I have to gain

Now I'm floating on the water Cause I learned to stop fighting the fear My body's feeling lighter Cause I've got new breath in my lungs

Now I'm floating on the water Cause I learned to stop fighting the fear My body's feeling lighter Cause I've got new breath in my lungs

Comments

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Wonderful sounding uke and vocal tone. Fantastic delivery. I like the extended metaphor and a lesson for all of us. 🙌🎶

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Assuming this is a baritone ukulele? It's got a lot of great low end. I think a lot of us can connect with the feeling of these lyrics. Particularly like "The less I have to hold; The more I have to gain". Your vocal quality here is just right. Nice job.

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The melody really mirrors the floating imagery you've conjured. There's an unresolved but yet positive vibe to the whole song. When you change the cadence on "Now I'm floating..." is a nice surprise. I personally wanted to hear it resolve but I think that's the point of the lyric - being at this point where possibility is in front of you - you've got new breath in your lungs.

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Really nice voice and song! It's got nice chill feel to it that goes well with the title. Nice job!

[FAWM]