Puffer

by @roblyon5150

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Puffer
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Liner Notes

#dailyprompt was "What helps you breathe easy." My mind immediately went to my inhaler. So, I had a little fun with it.

Lyrics

I breathe like Darth Vader Without my inhaler. I’m made to suffer Without my puffer. Not trying to be funny. Not trying to boast. But of all the things i’m bad at, My breathing sucks the most!

(CHORUS) Give it to me, give it to me. Lord, don’t take my breath away. Someone give me my puffer. So I can breathe another day.

I don’t sing any songs Around the campfire. But we can sing by The humidifier. Not trying to be funny. Not trying to boast. But of all the things i’m bad at, My breathing sucks the most! (CHORUS)

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Great job and sound. I'm so jelly because I can't/won't lay down music. I'm a scare-d-cat!!

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Why? This is only for fun. Go through some of the songs on here and check out what people do with just an unplugged instrument and a phone. I think you'll be encouraged.

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Awesome opening couplet. And it never really looks back from there... Nice leaning forward kind of groove - almost felt the sense of urgency, in finding that damn "puffer"

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Oh finding my puffer is urgent sometimes! It was a very fun write and thank you so much for listening!

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I like how the lat line in the chorus goes to the major 3rd, a classic blues move after the minor tonality

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Love the groove. And the sparse arrangement works so well. Good vocals, the demo sounds good, too. Thanks for participating with the daily prompt.

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Start a band called Wheezer -- no, that's taken. Sort of. The kind of song old blues players oughta sing!

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I did have a line about weezer but i ran out of time

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