Done
Challenge: SAWTOOTH MELODYLiner Notes
#28wordslater was a fun but tricky little challenge. I could only use 28 unique words in my song.
I think this also works with the #weeklychallenge as well? Someone correct me if I'm wrong.
Lyrics
Done I'm done with this I'm done with me I'm done with you I'm breaking free
I've done my best I've done my trial I've done my test I'm done done done
Done I've done my least I've done it all I've done my best I'll take the fall
I'm done with trying I'm done and tired I'm done with crying I'm done done done
Won't you save me?
Comments
I like this, it’s about finishing something unhealthy I feel. There’s a catalyst feeling in these proclamations. A necessary decision has finally been made. The piano reflects this urgency and resolve.
Well done using limited words to convey a strong feeling of letting go . The music is really effective in emphasizing the letting go.