FAWM: "Rescue"

Rescue

1 week ago by @jwhanberry

Skirmish: Rescue (@atornberg)

Rescue

jwhanberry

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Liner Notes

#noai #skirmish #acousticonetake #rescue

Had a hard time making this work even a little bit.

Guitars: Guild D-25 Constructive criticism is always welcome. Tell me all about it! No AI was intentionally used in this or any of my music.

Lyrics

Rescue

Drifter Lost in a cloud Fallin' behind Callin' out loud To be rescued

Nomad Lost in the sand Lookin' for somethin' But I never planned On a rescue

Ch I need a rescue Something (Someone) to save me Bless you For the hand (time)(all) that you gave me

Sailor Adrift at sea Awash in the waves I hope you're looking for me With a rescue

Vagabond Lost in time Minute by minute Hopin' to find Some kind of rescue

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Comments

@mariekevink 6d

Ooohhhh I like the driving beat here. For some reason I just thought of Ghostriders.....

@ruby 1w

This is great, the melody is really interesting and pulls you in. The driving tempo and rhythm give it that sense of urgency. The lyrics work really well to. Great skirmish.

@richardmasters 1w

This is a worthy skirmish, even without the arrangements - I like the words and the way the melody moves unexpectedly - it's a keeper

@dannen 1w

the beat is like a heart beat, driving the lyrics. Well done!

@atornberg 1w

I like the beat. I think it works well except for a bit of remixing and editing, but the ideas are there. Coincidentally, I had similar struggles using a phone app called Demo to create something a bit out of my comfort zone. I think the gallobing beat leads to the urgency in the words. It pairs well. Pretty great for an hour I'd say!