If there would be a fire
by @vince_link
Liner Notes
#rock #fullproduction #lovesong
I carried this idea for quite a while. Today I also wrote an English version. Here is the German version: https://fawm.org/songs/322435 I kept it quite simple but I really like it!
Lyrics
Where are the little gestures And your loving gaze? I miss the way you once were Where are the happy days?
But unable to speak Understanding dies I can no longer see Myself in your eyes
If there would be a fire If there would be a loving touch And yet I long for it so much From you
No fire inside me, no, everything is numb. I thought that your love Would go on and on
But how did it begin? Where has it all gone? Togetherness in silence – Two became one and one
If there would be a fire If there would be a loving touch And yet I long for it so much From you
Why don't you want to be happy anymore? Where's the girl that I once adored?
If there would be a fire If there would be a loving touch And yet I long for it so much From you
Comments
Great Rockin' Tune! I really liked the hook in the chorus. The chord progression was super energizing and the rhyming turn around rocked! When you switched instrumentation from the electric to the acoustic guitar it gave the tune new dimension. The vocal rhythm during the verses kept it really tight and interesting. :) I love the vibe!!
I like the way you handle the verses, almost with an arpegio, making the chorus really stand out from the verses. Great song!
Love the guitar tone! The song has a great groove and I found myself head banging while I was listening 😂
Better in English I think, although the German version has its charms too. Good rocker