Can you feel (I can feel)?
by @paulmilne
Skirmish: I CAN FEEL (@corinnecurcio)Liner Notes
Demo provided by @daveyboy103 in an amazing dance production! I'll just down tools on this one now.
Lyrics
Can you feel (I can feel) the fire burning hot Can you see (I can see) the flames shining bright Can you hear (I can hear) the owl in the night Can you taste (I can taste) the whiskey shot
Can you feel (I can feel) your hand in mine Can you see (I can see) the moon above Can you hear (I can hear) the stars' cold song Can you taste (I can taste) the bitterness of love
Can you feel (I can feel) the bitterness of love
They say love is sweet (I can't feel it) Sweet as a lover's kiss (I can't feel it) Where are the minds that meet? Where is eternal bliss?
Can you feel (I can feel) the distance between us Can you see (I can see) a face turned away Can you hear (I can hear) a disappointed sigh Can you taste (I can taste) the "go away"
They say love is sweet (I can't feel it) Sweet as a lover's kiss (I can't feel it) Where are the minds that meet? Where is eternal (where is eternal (where is eternal))bliss?
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Thanks for the enthusiasm. i agree that David's demo is great and just right for these lyrics. Couldn't have asked for more, really.
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Intriguing. Looking forwardto it!
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I see this as a dance number, can I have a go at it? I know you will be doing it yourself, the different approaches might be interesting?
It's not how I was thinking about it, but yeah, go for it. My email is on my profile page, just let me have a listen before you post it please 😄
I don't normally spend several days on a production and risk veto so I will leave it with you. No offence intended Paul
Well actually, just go for it if you're still interested. I've listened to your music and am happy for you to have a crack at it.
Ok thanks , it will be very cool
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Love the going through the senses – what a good take on the prompt! And the echoes/callbacks in the brackets are great. Nice work!
Thanks, I've got the music worked out, just need to record it.
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Oh I missed these lyrics as part of that skirmish. I really enjoy lyrics with a response in them. Very clever writing and I like the literal use of the prompt. I am off to check the demo!