My Dove

by @jasmr

Liner Notes

I wrote a lot of this song while it was a slow day at work and my manager wasn't looking. I tried to experiment a bit with some layered harmonies and I'd like if there was a really gentle guitar picking pattern in the background (kind of like Man in Room 39 by The Arcadian Wild, if anyone knows what I mean) but I couldn't really come up with anything I liked. Anyway, enjoy!

#folk #acoustic #acousticonetake #guitar #girlwithguitar #needsguitar #singersongwriter #acousticguitar #harmonies

Lyrics

Far, far away There stands a man o’ver the thunder Up, up above The wind’s blown his soul to its rest Down, down below His life’s love walks a lonely trail and wonders Oh when, oh when will I see my love again?

My dear, oh my love Wish you could come back to me My love, oh my dove You’ve gone a place I cannot be ‘Til my breath leaves my lungs Heart drums its last beat My dear, oh my love Will you please wait for me?

On, on she goes To a life without the one she wants most Low, low she goes Dragged down by the weight of love lost Down, down he cries Voice carried by the wind o’ver the coast My dear, my love you will see me again

My dear, oh my love Don’t waste your life because of me My love, oh my dove Go forth and live vehemently ‘Til your breath leaves your lungs Heart drums its last beat My love, oh my dove For you, I’ll wait patiently

There will be days When the weight seems to lessen There will be days When the heaviness wins Until the day When she finds herself in heaven She’ll laugh, drink and dance But sometimes she sings

My dear, oh my love Wish you could come back to me My love, oh my dove You’ve gone a place I cannot be ‘Til my breath leaves my lungs Heart drums its last beat My dear, oh my love Will you please wait for me?

Comments

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Strong traditional feel! A Celtic vibe! Love it!

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Those harmonies/background vocals and your melodies, oh wow, this is such a treat for my ears! Masterly written too!

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@cts

The chorus...oh the chorus. So wonderful. Your delivery gives it so much life, but I must share, the "til my breath leaves my lungs, heart drums its last beat" lines are so moving to me. This is a beautiful narrative as a whole, but what I've pointed out is just one of many moments here that make this special.

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A very complete and interesting lyric! Very strong vocal performance and lovely backing touches/harmonies! last 4 lines of the chorus tie it all up really well!

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@jasmr

Thanks so much! I feel like this was one of the lucky occasions where the lyrics almost wrote themselves.

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Ahh, love this! It has this beautiful undulating feel and the ahs bring these visuals of a lullabye for loss. Beautiful harmonies and I love that this song has the capacity to cross genres depending how you orchestrate it. I always find the best songs come out while I'm passively doing something else (driving, walking etc). Today I was on duty at the swimming carnival and wrote some lyrics -ha!🙃

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@jasmr

Thanks! I'm glad the swimming carnival was at least somewhat productive haha! Writing this definitely made my shift go quicker as well. And you know I'm always open to some violin in my songs if you're ever interested 😉

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@mfunky

Great Voice, great harmonies. Enjoyed listening to this. Your Manager will forgive you, if he finds out.

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@jasmr

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I told him I was writing a shopping list 😂

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Really nice voice and song! It's got a nice melody and lyrics. I really like those harmonies as well. Nice job!

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@jasmr

Thanks so much!

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