FAWM: "Lemonade"

Lemonade

2 weeks ago by @omaistarz

Liner Notes

Hey, this is my first skirmish! Can't believe I actually completed it within the hour. OK I wrote the song but didn't record the demo within the hour, but I think that still counts. Not much else to say except, I could use some warmer weather and a lemonade. I'll post the demo in a bit.

Lyrics

verse: If there's a refresher I can see none better A glass filled with Ice There's nothing so nice as a lemonade Sweet, tart lemonade

When the temperature's hot It sure hits the spot Order it twice 'cause once won't suffice yeah my lemonade Sweet, tart lemonade

For relief from the heat You know I will reach for my lemonade

bridge: You can add some flavor It plays well together with a berry (strawberry, blueberry, mulberry...) But keep it simple when the skies are sunny Alright maybe add a drop of honey (repeat verse)

Comments

@dannen 1w

Refreshing! I like the melody. Catchy, I might be humming this one all day. Lemonade!

@omaistarz 1w

I'm happy you enjoyed it. Thank you! 😊

@jdschramm 1w

Love that 80s guitar sound, and of course lemonade. Production sounds great, and lyrics are spot on. Thanks for showing us we can write songs about anything.

@omaistarz 1w

I appreciate your comment, especially regarding writing about anything. What to write about has been a huge barrier for me to just put something down. I've been working on opening myself up. I love the skirmishes for that reason. The big decision is removed from the process and one can move on and make it happen. Thank you for listening!

@porrectus 2w

Octave vocals, sweet. Super fun song. Love the structure of this song. It really pops. Really nice work, great skirmish.

@omaistarz 2w

Thank you very much. I'm so happy you enjoyed it. I still haven't figured out how to serve lemonade here for every listen, but I'm working on it. :-)

@alyak72 2w

Got me wanting some lemonade too. Sweet and light track. I really like how the guitar and drums sit with your vocals

@omaistarz 2w

I wish I could give out a cup with every listen. :) Thank you!

@longbat 2w

Fun use of triplets, and the backing berry line is great

@omaistarz 2w

Thank you. I appreciate the listen and the comment.

@jwhanberry 2w

Not really lemonade weather here either but it gives us something to which we may look forward. Good lyric. Let us know when the demo happens.

@omaistarz 2w

Thank you, and I was think the same thing as I contemplated the piles of snow outside my window. Thanks for the comment.

@rahma_the_bass 2w

This is truly a love letter to lemonade. Now I want some. This song is a lot of fun.

@omaistarz 2w

Thank you. I was thinking "radio jingle" when I was writing it. I guess I need to find lemonade company. lol

@rahma_the_bass 2w

I was literally thinking, this should be a jingle, in my head when I was reading it. Spot on!

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