Water Pattern - lyrics

by @rica

Liner Notes

For now, I’m sharing the lyrics on their own, and the improvised demo - finished song as follows.

#singersongwriter #improvisation #piano #neoclassical #folk #experimental #ambient #unfinished

Lyrics

Water Pattern - Vocal unrecorded yet.

Verse 1:
 How wonderful— Waves arise, 
And that alone is enough. They’re simply there— Born of words, of quiet moves,



Chorus: When ー echoes meet, 
ah ah ah yeah
ah... Quietly shifting form 
 woo woo woo yeah... Quietly shifting form

Verse 2: 
Round round, echoes—circling through Round round, echoes—rippling anew



Chorus: 
Echoes meet, 
 ah ah ah yeah... 
resonating, changing their patterns—how far? ah ah ah yeah

 Gently shifting form 

(Round round, echoes Round round, echoes)

Comments

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I really like the interplay between the piano notes cascading out with such urgency and the vocalisations, with their more considered cadences. Like @serene I found the sharper vocals that come in at 6.40 another lovely contrast. It helps the piece build and swell towards the end. The lyrics fit really well with the pattern theme you’ve established through the music, I’m sure they’ll sound brilliant! It’s a beautiful, atmospheric piece of music - thank you for sharing it in its current form!

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@rica

Aww thank you for listening, and giving me thoughtful feedback! I ll do my best.

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Wow Rica the piano and vocals are both so captivating. Love what the vocals are doing about the 6.40 mark onwards.. the lyrics are beautiful too and could slot in though I do love the non lyrical vocal 'cries'

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@rica

Ah thank you so much to listen this long piece!! Yes, I cherish this non-lyric style, and my challenge keep this passion and give it a lyrics.. hopefully I can finish it with FAWM.

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@kfigu

Love that demo, loveeee thar piano. Great job, great vocal - haunting but great.

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@rica

Thank you so much!

[FAWM]