This came up on random and I’m so glad it did. Love the chords, words and melody and what a voice. Wonderful.

I love how to manage to rhyme "world's on fire" with "we were divided". Your voice is a salve for these dark and painful times, so beautiful. Your melodic choices are gorgeous, I love hearing you flip to upper register and then prove that your lower range can go further than we expect. Beautiful, Rachel!

on a random listen drew me in lot to like here

Those are powerful lyrics. Wonderful vocal runs here as well. I really enjoyed this tune!

Love this. Beautiful melody, and great message. Kinda Nick Drake-esque. Ironically, I think this song has more to say. Keep going!

I loved the meandering melodies. This message really resonates in this crazy world. I like how you muse about the division starting long before it became apparent. Very somber, very beuatiful.

The hesitant timing on "world's on fire" and "were divided" just kills me. Holy Joni Mitchell melodies in that verse, and throughout the whole song. It's way you pop so effortlessly into your head voice, and the way the contrasting low notes sound like a mini dirge in contrast. That faint yodel just retches the feels right of me. (don't think that's the right way to use that word, but I don't care) I am crying in front of my computer listening to this. Simply gorgeous.

Nice work!

Very nice! Lyrics flow well and melody fits perfectly with message.

The sad resignation of that first line is absolutely brilliant. Sweet melody and great words!

This is really nice. I like your voice and also the lyrics.