Madrid
by @cicpisces
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Lyrics
Madrid
You acted out of malice You never gave me a second thought You walked away so casually I saw the footprints on my floor
Now i don't wanna hear your voice You're not very nice
You wanted your freedom You know what you did You laid the bate Captured me And ran off to Madrid Lied when you were breathing You know what you did You played the game Then took the leap And ran off to Madrid
I tried to make you happy I gave you all of my precious time I held on to you desperately Im sad a never read the signs
Now i don't wanna hear your voice You're not very nice
You wanted your freedom You know what you did You laid the bate Captured me And ran off to Madrid Lied when you were breathing You know what you did You played the game Then took the leap And ran off to Madrid
Goodbyes are over rated All i feel is hatred And im gonna let myself feel So i can quickly heal
Now i don't wanna hear your voice You're not very nice
You wanted your freedom You know what you did You laid the bate Captured me And ran off to Madrid Lied when you were breathing You know what you did You played the game Then took the leap And ran off to Madrid
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Hmmm....if I remember later, may I add some guitar or something to it, maybe the trippy effects? Hmmm... I really like it, though don't blame Madrid! (you didn't, I know). Also douchebags gotta douche, right?
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Sure, youre welcome to spread your magic. Thanks
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I love the tension and drama — and the feeling of inevitability, which reinforces the meaning even if it arose only after the fact. “When you were breathing” is a good sharp swipe at the character who proved to be a villain.
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What kind of feedback are you looking for?
General feedback is fine. Anyone who wants to add music and vocals are welcome.
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"lied when you were breathing" definitely does not sound like a nice person good words and "ran off to Madrid" is a good hook
Thanks. I appreciate the comment.
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Ah hurt and heartbreak. A never ending human emotion it seems. Like your coupling of "You know what you did, ran off to Madrid" . "You wanted your freedom" - Yep, don't we all? :)