Spine
by @jennakole
Liner Notes
#alternatetuning #sadbastardmusic #voicememo
Boy howdy, did February just creep right on up.
Probably will not be using voice memos the rest of the month, but this feels like a throwback.
Lyrics
So I will be the tree Falling silently Been cutting off my limbs With no one noticing
I thought it was a skill Saw it in my bloodline Bending like boughs to your wind Cold snapping up my spine
I think I’m still asleep Got handfuls of your teeth Cash in for some self worth Am I smiling?
I thought it was a skill Saw it in my bloodline Bending like boughs to your wind Cold snapping up my spine
Don’t wanna be in the way Carve a path out of me Fighting weeds since you last passed Over or outgrowing
I thought it was a skill Saw it in my bloodline Bending like boughs to your wind Cold snapping up my spine
Made me feel my spine
Comments
Jenna!! Really enjoyed this. Sweet voice with enchanting guitar riffs in the verses. This is probably my favorite lyric " I think I’m still asleep Got handfuls of your teeth Cash in for some self worth Am I smiling?"
Thanks Sophie!
I love how gentle, balanced, and dynamic your rhythm and percussion is! Lovely chord progression as well! And that falsetto is falsettoing!
Being a long time fan, any opinion I have is going to be tainted with well deserved bias. 3rd verse is equally brutal and vulnerable.
I love how this song just creates such a wistful, distinct atmosphere. Beautiful vocals and introspective lyrics!
haunting and beautiful
Love the vocal melody, and clear tone. Lyrics are very relatable, and perfect for a Virginia winter.
"bending like boughs to your wind" wow, so good!
Beautiful voice, and I love the dynamic guitar playing. Nice work!
Like this. It has a cool 90s indie / alternative vibe to it.
This is great, your voice is this beautiful blend of soft and strong! I love this driving riff too
Head nodding in rhythm immediately with the guitar riff. Nice alt tuning and super-memorable riff. The melody and your vocal approach are the perfect contrast to the darker riff. Great performance!
I love this guitar part and how it changes between the verses and the choruses. The way you’re mixing nature-based ideas in the verses and body-based images like the spine is really cool!
I love the guitar riff so much and how your voice goes up at the very end of “spine” in the choruses! “Don’t wanna be in the way, carve a path out of me.” Is such a killer line too.
I like the melody and the vocal dynamics. Guitar playing is very soothing. The lyrics carry a weight with graphic hints of a story that add up to intrigue.
Right away the guitar led me in. Great playing! Great voice, too, it fits the vibe perfectly.
Good luck with FAWM!
The rocking bass line on the guitar really carries the song and compliments your higher, more delicate vocals. I agree with @sravanikameswari that the line, "Don't wanna be in the way, carve a path of me," is really poignant (and relatable). Great first FAWM song!