Love the pacing on the verses, the melody on "Hurdles" and "end." The chorus, too, has some dramatic jumps that just wail. I hope your love is surviving well, friend.

Very interesting! I do think it would possibly hit better if it were in the first person: we've been together..... I still believe.....I got it so wrong. I love your vocal and the music has my attention throughout.

Whoa. Liking it. Good angular minor chords. Nice fuzzy guitar tone.