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The Door

by @cindyrella 

Feb 23   ss022219h superskirmish feast

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The Door
© Cindy Prince 2019

She walked through the giant maze
In a dense summer morning haze
The air was still, no breeze at all
At last she came to a massive wall

In the brick wall there was a door
Larger than anything she'd seen before
Carved oak wood with a large golden knob
And a fire breathing dragon at the top

She grasped the knob, it felt cold
What did the next moment hold
The big door creaked as it gave way
One single candle was on display

She heard a woosh, a dragon appeared
She'd hoped not but it was what she'd feared
The dragon's fire consumed her then
As it had done eagerly time and again

Are dragons real, or mere folklore
You'll find out if you open that door

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  • @tamsnumber4  Feb 24

    This is awesome, what a great write and it reads so well, love this idea and the visuals...wow!

  • @donna  Feb 24

    Ooooh, I love the twist! Wasn't expecting that. 😉 Nice tight storytelling, Cindy.

  • @wobbiewobbit  Feb 23

    such a great storytelling flow. really pulls you in and the payoff doesn't disappoint, i love the last lines too.

  • @kahlo2013  Feb 23

    Gorgeous poetry and images! Love your writing and creative thoughts!

  • @cynthiawolff  Feb 23

    A great take on the door prompt..
    Another cracker Cindy...

  • @pearlmanhattan  Feb 23

    Ohh, I like this one! I love dragons and fairy tales. Great suspense and imagery. You tell a great story! thanks for skirmishing! 😀

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