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This is way outside of my normal genre and or writing type, but i was listening to "Border Song" and this idea popped up into my head.
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Father, oh please save my life
I cant take anymore, hand me that knife
A hand from above stops me
He is the one i shall be
Lead me down the path of Heaven
Like i use to do when i was seven
Blood of Christ in my body
But it seems i've found a new hobby
Sinning, so the blood runs cold
Its one of the only ways I can act bold
forgive my hateful acts, father
douse me with holy water
(Instrumental break)
@stuartbenbow Feb 21
Wow, that’s definitely a different direction for you. Cool lyrics, with some vivid imagery. Nice solid rhyme scheme, too.