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Feb 2019 folk acoustic acoustic-rock
Another quick one.
One hour writing and recording.
Very simple chords.
But fun recording....
Fire burning high
Mind running low
And I can't help no no no
I let it burn, burn down
REFRAIN:
I'm standing here and watch the fire burns
I'm standing here and it burns burns burns
Fire breaking through
My heart is breaking too
And I can't help no no no
I let it break, break down
REFRAIN
Fire choking slow
My heart has died
And I can't help no no no
I let it die, die, die
REFRAIN
@jsini Feb 26
Love your voice. I like the burn burn burn. Mostly, I appreciate how original this is. Cool tune!
@arkka Feb 24
Cool (no pun intended) lyrics and I really, really like the melody. The guitar arrangement works great too. Great job!
@karan Feb 2019
Das hat Kraft und Energie! Toll komponiert, gespielt und gesungen habt Ihr das!
@axl Feb 2019
Das Bild, auf dem der Song aufbaut, ist so simpel wie effektiv und kommt völlig unklischeehaft rüber. Sehr befriedigend finde ich die Stellen, wo die Melodie auf high, low, through etc landet. Cooles Riff, toll gesungen. Super Sache!
@mikeskliar Feb 2019
this is really striking and dramatic and well done! very unique phrasing and its got a strong mood.
@lazykat Feb 2019
Still have to giggle about this one!
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@nancihobson1 Feb 2019
Good stuff. The chords and the rhythm all go so well with the lyrics. I love the 'burn...burn...burn' at the end of the refrain. Guitar sounds really nice in this, just enough. Enjoyed listening!!