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recorded this rly fast and gave up on trying to mix it Lol
with every yellow light
You end up slamming on the breaks
You always make the choice
A little too late
and I know its hard
to know exactly what to make
Of this and that and us
And every little space
You don’t have to stay
You don’t have to stay
@saulius 2 days
Wow. Your lyrics convey a lot of perception and awareness.
I'm actually glad that this is a short song and that you didn't say more. You may choose to add to it later, but then it will be a DIFFERENT song. There's nothing wrong with that, but sometimes, less is more. Knowing when to stop is an art in itself.
There's a lot I'm reading into what you said, my mind filling details, imagining conversations and feelings. I love it when lyrics or poems do this, that is, when they become sentient and begin to live a life of their own apart from the composer/author.
@max 4 days
Watchlisted!
Love what I hear. Very unique performance.
@onceandfuturegabi 4 days
I love your phrasing, particularly in the second stanza. I'd enjoy seeing it expanded a little, maybe just with another verse/chorus, but I could also see this little thing wedged in the middle of an album or something and jarring in its shortness. Either way, love what you're doing!