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Feb 11
‘Heaven has a wall, a gate and a strict immigration policy. "
i went to the gates of heaven
but they weren’t gonna let me in
i didnt have the papers required
and they said i had sin within
i looked down the holy wall
the razor wire wrapped in clouds
i wasn’t waving a flag and a bible
to make Jesus proud
heaven is a tricky place
where few have ever been
there are rules in place
to buy your way in
its only for the rich
and their next of kin
the system is rigged
a lot has changed since the days of old
its now just some exclusive club
you cant scale the walls of heaven
you have to buy god’s love
@vmr67 Feb 16
Simple man and guitar song but a good one:)
@lanasolyluna Feb 12
A pared down track with a lot of depth and spirit. Really organic feeling to the track.
@ballyhoot Feb 11
I like your frantic country guitar playing over the thumping bass. Vocal delivery fits well and is well executed. Nice job on the cynical lyrics, too.