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DEMO at:
https://fawm.org/songs/94418/
I was going to try to write something sensual and sexy but my muse took me to something poppy and happy and hopefully not to sappy!
I Just Want You
V1
something fierce
has taken control
something strong
is about to unfold
something new
is going to grow
I can’t stop where
my heart will go
L
and I don’t want to.....
I just want you
C
yeah
I just want you..
to make you smile
I just want you...
to hold you awhile
I just want you
to give you my love
I just want you
to know the best of us
to explore love as fully
as fully as this love can be....
V2
something good
is going to happen
something great
when I see you again
something true
to my heart’s passion
I can’t think if
can’t wait for when...
L
and I don’t want to....
I just want you
C
yeah
I just want you..
to make you smile
I just want you...
to hold you awhile
I just want you
to give you my love
I just want you
to know the best of us
to explore love as fully
as fully as this love can be....
@chipwithrow Mar 27
I was curious to see what was different, other than the cool ad-lib, between your original and @rickamorphis' rockin' demo.
These words were sure made for that big, glorious rock anthem - an ode to good ol' healthy passion. Great collab!
@rickamorphis Feb 15
One of the things that hooked me on this lyric was the way it goes, "I just want you to make YOU smile...to hold YOU awhile,,," rather than using 'me' in those instances. I think it rings true because when you're in love, that's how you feel. So yeah, it hit me right in that place.
@colgoo Feb 11
A great Valentine’s song. Love the flow. Nice writing.
@wacha Feb 11
This is a such a sweet song, you have captured the infatuation of a new relationship perfectly.
@theresaj Feb 11
This makes me smile. There’s an upbeat, fun feel to the words and you can’t help but feel happy when reading them! I love the idea of exploring love. Great, positive words!
@robynmackenzie Feb 10
This is both powerful and super cute! It really captures the spark of a new relationship and falling in love.
@cindyrella Feb 10
That's some fierce writing! Will make a heck of a song!