Just a cute little upbeat song. It's a nicely cheesy and I felt like it could fit in a musical. Quick one and could use some polishing. But I went for it on the vocals and had some fun.
Also, I'm pretty sure I've lifted the verse melody off a pop song but I can't tell which one. If anyone knows, let me know, it's bugging me.
The ending (and other sections) could use some love. Alternative final lines or any feedback/rewrite warmly welcomed.
Yeah your lips are like candy
And I can have a sweet tooth some times
I'm gonna get a cavity I know
But I don't even mind
Oh your hips are like honey
You move 'em like you've been born before
I'm gonna get my ass out on this floor
I wanna take you dancin'
Cause baby ecstacy's in front of me
Don't wanna let it go
'cause when I feel your body's rhythm
I'm gonna lose control
And heaven's gonna take me
Your lips are like candy
And I can't help but help myself sometimes
They're right, you're gonna rot my teeth and mind
But that's somethin' for later
Your eyes are like silver
I always knew you were a
I'm gonna get dizzy in their shine
You're gonna put out the moon
Yeah, your lips are like candy
The taste so sweet like grapes straight off a vine
And I wanna get my face all sticky
Making hot wet whoopy tonight