The playing and rhythms are a little shaky, but you get the idea. The idea is fully formed; I just need to practice more.
I had intended to write a fiddle tune on mandolin and practice it to be able to record for you on fiddle, but hey. Got halfway there! I'll put a fiddle version on Soundcloud at some point.
What do you think? Are there parts that flow together particularly well or feel more disconnected? I've not written many fiddle tunes and am purely going off of 'oh sure, that sounds okay'. I'd love your feedback; you probably have more concrete thoughts than I do.