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Even if it started
Out of sight and 19 miles below
It's not not coming so on your toes
A deeper well to pull
Tremolia. Tailing rains from splintered beams.
Tremolia. No later light from spiral seams.
Ten-ring wire mesh links
Fading red no longer chained
A chance to breathe a little bit of air
Before we head for home
Tremolia. Tailing rains from splintered beams.
Tremolia. No later light from spiral seams to crush and sift and sip.
Slater's woodcut celebrates
The silent flooding coastal waves
Feeding on the blistered wake
This bringer of new things
@thedutchwidows 1 week
Another cracker. I love the chorus - as Headfirstonly said, it really lifts off. It's really well produced too - it sounds great.
@headfirstonly 1 week
Cool progression in the verses, and that chorus really takes off. I like it; great bass sound driving everything along.