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TAKE ME TO HEAVEN
VERSE
I see cool shadows in dark places,
Where lingering lovers hide their faces.
Whispering words that are so hard to find.
PRE-CHORUS
Won’t you take me to heaven,
This time.
VERSE
The Sun is setting in the Summer sky,
Down by the bayou my oh my!
The steam is rising through the pines.
PRE-CHORUS
Won’t you take me to heaven,
This time.
CHORUS
Take me to heaven,
Take me to heaven,
Take me to heaven,
This time.
INSTRUMENTAL BREAK
VERSE
My raven haired woman comes easy to mind.
A breeze through the tall grass drifts on by.
I loved and I lost her way down the line.
PRE-CHORUS
Won’t you take me to heaven,
This time.
VERSE
People laughing as the Sun goes down,
In the bars and juke joints of this town.
And I think of my longing e-ver-y time.
PRE-CHORUS EXTENDED
Won’t you take me to heaven,
This time
OUT CHORUS
Come on and take me to heaven,
I want you to, take me to heaven,
Please won’t you take me to heaven..
This time.
@geoff61 1 week
It's both 😀
@mikeb 1 week
Some nice phrases in this, and also a dichotomy of fun/care-free references and more seriousness. I can't determine if the heaven references are religious or other!