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This needs more mixing, more editing etc. But this is #2, and my second every FAWM submission. so im stoked.
Here and Now
Been humbled by the day
I fell and broke my crown
Impulse to break away
And soothe the sorrow now
And unearth my soul somehow
Here and now is where I stand
A better man
Than the one you saw before
Here and now is where I stand
Facing a New Horizon
Here and now is all I have
Whoah oh oh
Was trampled by fate
But now I ride the tide
Thirst for blame now restrained
I burn with the light inside
I’ve tamed misfortunes might
Here and now is where I stand
A better man
Than the one you saw before
Here and now is where I stand
Facing a New Horizon
Here and now is all I have
Whoah oh oh
Nearly gave up the fight
To fade into twilight
Found the faith inside
To wield the truth
And dispel my ruth
All thats left to do
Is fly
Here and now is where I stand
A better man
Than the one you saw before
Here and now is where I stand
Facing a New Horizon
Here and now is all I have
Whoah oh oh
@scottlake 8 hours
So many chords in unexpected but delightful places! And if I’m not mistaken some odd numbers of lines in verses - which is a killer combination.
@kristian 4 days
damn what a nice song. sounds kinda professional; love your vox so much.. all those lovely background vocals .. and that bridge 😀 sounds very polished. excellent track
@ustaknow 6 days
Great swing to it, - found myself thinking 1 triplet, 2 triplet, 3 triplet 😀 Great tone, mix, clean guitar, vocals.
@marthie 1 week
Great song- I love your virtuosity on the instrumentals especially. and great chord progressions. Great positive message