This one came to me in the shower yesterday. I have written a few others but I wanted to record this one first - and as usual I spent way too much time on it.
[V1]
The path divides
And now there’s more than one way
For me to choose
My head it says
Be careful don’t you know you have
So much to lose
[CH]
When it all falls away
And there is nothing left to say
The façade I had built is coming apart
When my compass just spins
And I have lost my way again
I-I-I follow my heart
I-I-I follow my heart
Follow
[V2]
Look for the stars
But I just can’t see their light
Too dark tonight
I close my eyes
And trust my heart will
Just be my guide
[CH]
When it all falls away
And there is nothing left to say
The façade I had built is coming apart
When my compass just spins
And I have lost my way again
I-I-I follow my heart
I-I-I follow my heart
Follow
@crisp1 5 weeks
Very accessible melody and a really nice vocal performance. This is a hit! Sometimes the best songs are the ones that come out of nowhere.
@mikedebenham 7 weeks
Good stuff. Love the natural, unforced feeling that shines through your songs.
@jeff9 7 weeks
So very polished. Sonics are just gorgeous--terrific instrument layering and excellent singing. This one will stick in my head for a while.
@bradbrubaker 8 weeks
I like how you worked the stars in, implying both the idea of using the night sky as a compass and the concept of the stars aligning. Well composed.
@psyt 8 weeks
This is definitely a keeper. Beautiful melodies, and great touching performance. Just beautiful.
@nancyrost 8 weeks
So melodic. Love the spacing in the vocal lead, and the instrumental fills. It is like a pop mantra.
@enigma4711 8 weeks
It sounds really nice. Good mix. I like what you've done with the melody - it takes a lot of good "turns" in some way (don't know how to explain it). Hey, has anybody ever told you you've got a bit of Chris Martin in you when you go to the higher notes? haha
@plushbaby 8 weeks
I think my favourite parts are either the "I,I,I" vocal part or the guitar that leads out of the chorus. I really like the word follow in songs too, and it works well in a song this filmic and epic.
As the songs comes back in after the breakdown it would be great to hear a ripping solo... maybe that's a bit standard, I mean I like what you have here especially all the small modulation flourishes, so maybe just ignore me! Cool song
@bluejean Feb 21
Nice melody and treatment of backing instruments and vocals. Very cool.
@burrsettles Feb 21
the core song here is a straightforward americana tune, but i like how you've dressed it up in this demo/recording with some other more modern poppy elements. very cool. harmonies are great as always!
@skwolven Feb 21
Love this one! The chorus is super catchy.