But lyrics and song content belong to the fawmers who wrote them!
I am disappointed by this track.
maybe next time
@splittybooms thanks so much for all the positive things you have to say. It always cheers me up you have no idea . . .
To answer your question, I think the main idea of the track is OK, but my ability to apply some more significant motion to the track fell flat. I couldn't figure out a 'B' section, so I did a twist on the 'A' section and left it that way. Just 'A' section songs can work, but this one felt like it needed some kind of face lift, and I simply couldn't do it.
I'm curious - what are you disappointed about in this particular track? Genuine question.
As a listener, it has movement, interesting arrangement that keeps me listening and the track doesn't drag or become boring, great mix, great space due to that mix, bright and pleasant melodies...
Its an enjoyable listen. Thoroughly solid.
It makes me think of things - like anime and bright colors.
It makes me feel things - like open fresh air and the speed of a vehicle moving down a scenic highway.
As a listener, I have no disappointments.
However, I DO understand that an artist is the one who dislikes their art the most. We usually find fault with something when others do not. I do it all the time.
But like I said, I really am curious what you feel this track lacks or what is wrong with it.
@bigmood go for it! I can send you stems if you'd like. Just DM me on Soundcloud and I'll get you them pronto!
Aww i love this synth melody, its super promising. Actually it kinda reminds me of thundercat. Would it be ok if I built something off the synth line?
I really like the melody on this one. Reminds me of - and this is a compliment, I promise - the theme music to TV for schools in the UK in the 80s. And a bit of Jarre as well. Everything works pretty well together for me, but it feels like it maybe needs another place to go before coming back to the main theme again? It's definitely worth hanging on to.
I like it. It has a sweet melody line. With the right lyric and vocal it could come alive. Keep on going on.
I feel what you mean, as the dnb flavor isn't really elevating the chords/melody much imo
....but I don't think it's a dud either.
I think you could rework this into a more "anime character has a good day" soundtrack type thing and it'd shine nicely.
This is fun and lighthearted! Keep on keeping on!
I really enjoy this. Great job. No reason to be disappointed. Some of us (me) have no abilities with musical instruments