Thanks, @donna for a great title for the second skirmish in our inaugural MONSTERSKIRMISH last weekend! This came together nicely, but I had an overly-ambitious idea for the vocals and I'm not sure I've found the sweet spot yet. However, in the interests of moving on, I'm finally uploading a scratch demo.
Definitely a work in progress so feedback or collabs are welcome!
Last night you called here and left me a message
Then today, you called me again
You say you need more time to get better
I say it's the start of the end
Cause you didn't listen...
Maybe I, I faltered. Maybe I stuttered
Maybe I never thought I'd be here
All alone with my heart trying to pick up the pieces
One more time I will try to be clear
Why won't you listen
To the words I have chosen so carefully
I don't want you to be confused
I love you more than anything I've ever known, dear
I fought harder than I thought I could
In the end if I leave maybe we both can be better
In the end we can be who we should
So why won't you listen?