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lo-fi acoustic folk-punk superskirmish short ss19d
think you're over the edge
made it off of that ledge
i don't know what to do
i don't know what to say
hurray for one minute songs!
i'm moving to folk punk today.
I like the guitar, it compliments well.
nice nice nice
Like how how how how
The repeated words
make it sound like you're mumbling
somehow how how how.
This may just be a sketch at the moment but what you have is intriguing enough so that if you return to it there's plenty to expand on.
Yeah! <rock hands and fist pumps>
This is a great sketch and worth developing...
I hear a great tune in the mAking...
Job well done
Wow-- The relaxed, slightly angry vocals work so well with the driving punk guitars. This one is worth fleshing out as it would make a rocking anthem.
oh, that guitar is cool, it's driving. And your vocal phrasing is great. It's a great delivery.
I like the "For now" bit and the "somehow" bit... It leads me to believe that the narrator is kind of astonished that the edge isn't a permanent fixture for the object of their attention... As though, they are aware that change is inevitable whether you act or speak or not...but somehow the person it's about, is clueless and thinks they're home free... And maybe they are, depending whose side of the edge you're on. I dig it.
Like the now now now and how how how driving home the poignancy of the lyric and adding to its poetry.