February Album Writing Month - FAWM.ORG

arms (*24697)

patfee

Tagged As:

bounce

Challenges:

W2: Riff-Driven!

Liner Notes:

stompin on ducks like baby's breath

Lyrics:

we're stuck on the arms of a galaxy
in a solar system without a name
it's just you and me, my love

i'm stuck in your arms, my love
don't fall off the world, hold on to me
don't fall off the world my love
it's just you and me

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debrandio 2 months ago

an understated diamond in the rough. Great tune man.
dustymason 3 months ago

Harmonizing with yourself works, great falsetto. Multi-tracking, enabling us to sing along with ourselves...that's magic- magic like plumbing. "We're stuck on the arms of a galaxy" love that.
boyatheart 3 months ago

What is good: bass riff, harmony-type riff on the... guitar? keyboard? lyrics, vocal melody, voice.
What's bad: nothing.

Nice song. I like the fact that it sticks to the riff and doesn't try to get all complicated.
maxbjornson 3 months ago

Wow Fee! Killer!

And check this

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KbW9JqM7vho&ob=av3e
steffan 3 months ago

This is flipping great. We should try to do it with Mikey Mike.
aardvarkk 3 months ago

Amazing lyrics. Badass! Great harmonies in the vocals. Digging the understated percussion. I might try to add a bit of distortion to warm up the 'riff' a bit. Or have something slightly varying about it throughout the track to keep it interesting. Really wicked tune. I think this is a cool song FAWM factored in or not! Great job!