February Album Writing Month - FAWM.ORG

All the sanity in me (*24617)

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rock 90s guitars drums bass vocals losing drugs

Liner Notes:

This is a really different song by me. Mainly because it doesn't have a real chorus Still I'm pretty pleased with it. Most happy with the lyrics how they turned out.

Lyrics:

Moon is full and so am I
Full of wine and moonshine
Playing notes to save a soul
Tomorrow the spirit will be gone

Moon is high and so am I
Flying across the distant sky
Catching dreams on the edge
of the sanity in me

Sweet dreams taste better than salt in the wounds
of so fragile and disillusioned mind, another one of a kind

Falling down with the sand of time
Thru the skies and over the line
I drew a way back then with lies
Old promises and rules were nothing but a disguise

Sold my soul for a dollar in a mug
On the streets I roam and crawl like a bug
And that's more than I wished to say
about the sanity in me

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robs 3 months ago

Beautiful chords! Subtle first verses, nice build up! Who needs choruses anyway
wolfkier 3 months ago

Firstly, nice to see you and listen to your work after 50/90.
Thanks for taking the time to look me up and listen. I'm glad you enjoyed.
This track is really nice, it's like a time bomb ticking waiting to explode.
Beautiful production and atmosphere as always.
I agree with @gerrybhoy a 3-5% lift in the vocals wouldn't hurt, even if it was graduated with the rise in the arc of the tune.
Looking forward to hearing more.
wolf
gerrybhoy 3 months ago

The production on this is really first rate as is the case with all of your material I have listened to. Echoes of Jeff Buckley, you have a great voice and your playing is way out there. The sense of drama and light and shade you deploy is magnificent. I'm a fan. Observation, the vocal could come up ever so slightly in the mix.
$Alexander \$ alexphott 3 months ago

Such a great composition, it's actually very inspiring. I'm loving the shit out of this, to be frank. You are awesome.
mattblick 3 months ago

Like the dreamy Zep style chord progression