February Album Writing Month - FAWM.ORG

Spinning

Liner Notes:

not good with words this year will work harder

Lyrics:

your lights came up
from behind
somewhere between outer dark

and i thought
you were still asleep
when you made your move on me

you have to spell it out
whatever you want
you know there are words I can't hear

breathe it out
or leave it in
pass it out
breathe again

there she goes
spinning out of control

the lights in the house
the voice in command
you're the one walking this time

something to say
for red warning flags
you were gone before you came

there she goes
spinning out of control

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Nancy Rost 1 week ago

Lovely tune and sound. I love the solo.

I agree with Phil on the lyric.
T.C. Elliott 1 month ago

I"m impressed. Both of the songs I've heard this so far are very good and fit nicely with each other. It's almost like hearing the first two cuts off of an alt.country album. That is suppose to be a compliment. No Depression would dig this stuff I think.
Phil Norman 1 month ago

Grimm! What a pleasant gift to find waiting for me in my watchlist. Hearing a new song from you is like falling into an easy peace while spending time with an old friend.

I think the lyric here works just fine. If anything, I'd just bring in the "there she goes spinning" hook in sooner...