The vocal delivery is unsettling, but I think that's the point. I wouldn't have guessed this was you when it came on the jukebox -- and that's a compliment. Love the "love is eternal" chorus. "beatnik rap" indeed.
The jazz sensibilities you've got working here are truly effective touches, but the standout is your beatnik rap - killer imagery and delivery, man. Props for that maddening guitar work, too.