Odilon Green 15


Connecticut USA   Jan 2013


Artist Bio

* FINAL 2017 FAWM UPDATE (Feb. 28, 2017)

I made it through six of my projected nine songs from my narrative concept album "The Cell Phone Tower Who Wanted to Be a Tree" (and 15 songs overall!) before felled by kidney stones in late February. So I "won" FAWM, and, even though I didn't complete my concept album, I'm off to a great start. I'm quite happy with most of of the concept songs, and even with regard to those that are more rough, I think I have a solid basis for moving forward.

I'm still recovering from my physically miserable last few days -- I basically gave up trying to record more by Feb. 25 -- but do fully intend to finish up drafts of the last three songs (or maybe four 😉 ) in fairly short order. After that, the plan is to re-record and improve the entire cycle -- and then re-work the text -- and then hire an artist to do illustrations -- and then get it up on a webpage (and, in some abstract dream, even POD print) -- all hopefully by 50/90! We'll see if that happens! (Yes, gosh darn it, it will!!! 😀 )

So overall, another successful FAWM as far as I'm concerned!


In junior high a long, long time ago, I elected to take flute as my required instrument. Unfortunately, in my second year, I was put in a third-year class due to a scheduling conflict. Being so far behind everyone else made me miserable. As a result, I did . . . unfortunate things to my flute to sabotage it in order to try to get out of class.

The repair guy figured it out pretty quick.

Nonetheless, while I've always enjoyed a very active listening relationship with music, the whole experience pretty much killed any interest I had in making my own. Until over twenty years later, when for some reason I picked up a keyboard and a computer DAW.

And now, I'm loving every minute of it.


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  • @johnstaples  Mar 10

    Sorry to hear your kidneys are still stoned! But c'mon! Now I'm stuck wondering whether or not that bear ate that kid and stuff! PLEASE keep me posted when each new chapter is ready!!

    And seriously hope you feel better soon!

  • @rayboneor  Mar 5

    You feeling better?

  • @fuzzy  Mar 1

    Of course I'll be doing 50/90! There is presently no place to follow my music outside of FAWM and 50/90, but after I move I will actually have some kind of reasonable internet access so I'm hoping to set something up then. Looking forward to hearing the conclusion of your story!

  • @fuzzy  Mar 1

    Hey, Thanx for all your great music this February! I always love your stuff!
    You didn't get your story finished I don't think - did you leave that little kid lost in the woods?!?

  • @tiller2  Mar 1

    Hey friend, you asked to know when I had music for my lyric "They Promised Us Space Planes." I do and I'd love your thoughts; I'll be around in March, too 😀 http://fawm.org/songs/68096/http://fa...

  • @klaus  Feb 28

    So nice of you to comment on Read My Hips. And congratulations on your Win. Hip hip hurrah! 😀

  • @reisupstudio  Feb 28

    Congrats on reaching 15 songs! Here is a recording of the other one I wrote called Memory Care
    See you around in the nutmeg state!

  • @lazykat  Feb 28

    Thanks for your comment 😀
    Happy last fawm days 😀

  • @colgoo  Feb 28

    Just dropping by to let you know I recorded "Telepathetic Lover"

  • @tiller2  Feb 27

    I put my whooping crane lyric to music if you have time for a listen 😀 http://fawm.org/songs/71572/

  • @jessica14  Feb 26

    Thank you so much for your comment on " my favourite child"! It made me laugh 😀

  • @juoppis  Feb 25

    Oh man, I just realized I hadn't thanked you for your great and long comment on Valentine's Day! Anyway, it really made my day and it's one of my fave comments this year, so cheers!

  • @fuzzy  Feb 25

    Thanx for the comment on "Unwind A Little Bit". It's interesting that both you and Tina thought it sounded like a sea chanty - that was the furthest thing from my mind while making it.

  • @reisupstudio  Feb 24

    Hey odilongreen! I finally posted a demo for the echo chamber! I hope you can check it out!

  • @konemake  Feb 24

    Thank you really much for your nice and useful comments. Especially your comment about the video projection in live performance was very useful. So far I've had only one solo gig and I was using a bit too childish animation kind of things but combining them with some truly terrifying video would probably make deep impact to audience. 😁

    Thank you very much one more time!

  • @yam655  Feb 24

    In my personal experience epiphanies are supposed to blow your mind and potentially forever change the way you experience the world. Plenty of religions and cults have been started by one person who experienced an epiphany.

    In my song we have discussion about what being _real_ actually means. It's fully embracing the world, not just the beautiful, but all of the mounds of blood and crap the world is filled with. But, then the song goes on about embracing it in a positive way that can't land anyone in jail, so we're not going to deal with literal blood and entrails, we'll go for the emotional equivalents and in a song we'll spread them about our canvas.

    And it's an introspective, reflective message with a literal representation of that in the treatment of the song.

    It's also possible that I make art instead of music. Some types of art aren't meant to hang in a living room. 😉

  • @rayboneor  Feb 24

    Thanks for the kind words. A few years ago, before I started writing songs, I literally could not sing, meaning I couldn't find melody or hear what note was to come next. As soon as I started making my own music, things started to make sense to me.

  • @metalfoot  Feb 23

    The vocals are all me, singing in different ranges. (Diluvian Dreams)

  • @boyatheart  Feb 23

    Thanks for commenting on my disco number! It was so much fun to involve my daughter on that track. Only two more to go for you! 😀

  • @santadharma Feb 23

    Thank you so much for your sweet comment on our Casio Punk song! Loved your PSA. Going to check out more soon.

  • @visiblydistorted Feb 23

    LOL you're very welcome. I'm glad you saw that - I realize I forgot to mention you with an @odilongreen 😀

  • @acromie Feb 22

    It's funny about the bear. I've been thinking about rewriting that line, but your comment makes me hesitate. I mean, from the standpoint of a kid, running into wildlife is a wondrous thing. As an adult, we know that's a tragedy waiting to happen. When I wrote it, I was channeling my inner child. But now the parent in me is unsure...

  • @rayboneor  Feb 21

    Thanks for listening and all the kind words. I was thinking about your early days as a fawmer. I recall that you were really self-conscious as a singer. Now people seek you out for your wit and ability to sing/speak a story

  • @atitlan Feb 21

    Thanks for commenting on my cheesy dance song. When I came across the 'cheer' sample I had to throw it into the mix - it just fit the mood 😀

  • @jwhanberry  Feb 21

    Thanks for your comments on "That's Not What I Meant". So glad you liked it.

  • @famouspatrick  Feb 19

    Thanks for the thoughtful comment on "A Happy Tune." I, also, wish that I could fully "retire." The best I could manage was to cut down to part-time, working shorter hours and fewer days. However, I can still enjoy my time to myself, which is what the singer celebrates in this tune; just claim a day as one's own and tell the world to kiss your attitude if they don't like it!

  • @cheslain  Feb 19

    Pardon me for taking such a long time to find the time to listen to your work properly. I just finished binge-listening to all your tunes so far (most of them a few times) and I find myself captivated. TCPTWWTBAT is coming along great, and I do hope you have the time to finish it. It's so full of imagination and a brilliant, warm sense of humour all done with such distinguishable style. I can't wait to hear how it unfolds. The tunes outside the story album are great too, Cowbell Daredevil being my favourite, probably. You definitely have your own sound both musically and vocally and I'm following your progress with great anticipation and joy.

  • @tiller2  Feb 19

    I much appreciated your thoughtful comments on my whooping crane lyric. As you know, that kind of fact-filled song takes some labor and one can't predict how it will go over. I do think our stories will have a place.

  • @ihelen  Feb 19

    Thanks for commenting on my cryptogram song! After reading your bio, I definitely had to listen to your cell phone tower song. If possible, please tell the tower that it's not big and ugly - it brings happiness and laughter to all who pass it on the highway. You produced a wonderful, very cute, and clever song there. 😀

  • @kingwoodkowboy  Feb 18

    odilongreen, thanks for reviewing "Today Is A Glad Glad Day For Me". Maybe the musical will be named 'Glad Sad Street'.

  • @dawn1 Feb 18

    Thanks for your lovely comment on 'Cross of Wood.' I am writing basic tunes for all these skirmishes and recording ideas to work on later, I think this one might be piano. I'll link you up when I do it 😀

  • @musicsongwriter Feb 18

    Thank you so much Odilon for your great comment on my skirmish lyric.
    It was truly amazing to read and I absolutely love your skirmish song. You are amazing!!!

  • @enigma4711  Feb 18

    Hi Odilon!

    Thanks a lot for your comment on "The Fool's Serenade".
    I'm proud of the fact that you'd describe it as sinister. 😉

    Kind regards,

  • @ferry0123 Feb 18

    Hey thanks for your comment on 'Daytime believer'!

  • @atitlan Feb 18

    Thanks for your comment on 'And the Birds Flew Away' - as we're now into the second half of FAWM comments are getting rarer, so I'm especially grateful for any that come along.

  • @metalfootlings Feb 18

    Yes, it was a piano improvisation. -metalfoot, on behalf of F#2, "The Surprise Song"

  • @robinkirby Feb 2017

    awesome songs here I enjoyed listening!

  • @reisupstudio  Feb 2017

    I hope to post recordings by the weekend! Thanks for the encouragement!

  • @waltermosch Feb 2017

    Thank you for your comment on 'the outcome'. Much appreciated. Happy fawming:)

  • @arose  Feb 2017

    Thank you for your insightful comments on Weep. Your thoughts on the structure (that happened intuitively) is very helpful for when I come back to it for refining post-February. Keep rockin!

  • @tiller2  Feb 2017

    Hi, you expressed interest in knowing when "Smoldering Coals" found music. Pete Murphy kindly provided and made a demo. Thanks. http://fawm.org/songs/69568/

  • @julesbf  Feb 2017

    Thanks for your kind comments on 'I am just like you', challenging material but hopefully delicately and respectfully dealt with.

  • @declan  Feb 2017

    Thanks for the update on your hand. It was only afterwards that I realised it was a metaphorical hand.

  • @leah0k Feb 2017

    Thank you for the compliment! 😁
    Now if you'll excuse me, I have a zombie after party to attend.

  • @magicturtle643 Feb 2017

    Thanks again for your comment! I can't tell you how much it means to get some positive feedback. Also really love that you called it ultraglam. That's like exactly the descriptor I want to aspire to--this album especially haha. Maybe I'm forcing the glam a little but whatever works! 😝

  • @cts  Feb 2017

    Tag has been added...

  • @devin  Feb 2017

    Good sir, my compositional comment was more of a foreboding overshadowing of the genre I was going to potentially use for a (no longer) secret song about your song!

    I just need to figure out how make "ceramic" guitar sounds now.

  • @fuzzy  Feb 2017

    Who knew there were so many?!?

  • @guatecoop  Feb 2017

    You are so kind! Thank you.

  • @valeriecox  Feb 2017

    Hey there. Thanks for the comment on my tarot song.

  • @vaticanvamps14 Feb 2017

    Love the tunes man, You got this quality about you that just makes the day brighter. And again thanks for all the kind comments on my tunes.

  • @deadhead  Feb 2017

    Thanks for checking out Morning Meadow. I'm glad that you enjoyed it! 😀

  • @famouspatrick  Feb 2017

    Thanks for the thoughtful comment on my "Dance" skirmish song. It is short, but Bobby McGee is only 2 verses and a chorus, also. (Not that I'm comparing myself to KK) I was going for a "Tennessee Waltz" feeling.

  • @famouspatrick  Feb 2017

    Thanks for the lengthy comment on my "Breakfast" skirmish song. Yup, I was just singing the recipe. Last year, I did the "Grilled Bratwurst Waltz."

  • @wickedmessenger1  Feb 2017

    Thank you so much for giving me such detailed and glowing reviews for several of my songs. It means a lot to me that you connected with my songs.

  • @cblack  Feb 2017

    Ha! Glad you enjoyed the cowbell! 😝

  • @musicsongwriter Feb 2017

    Thank you for your comment and compliment. I googled the band you've mentioned, they sound awesome!

  • @kahlo2013  Feb 2017

    Gosh! I am blushing with all of your generous and kind comments!!!

  • @rayboneor  Feb 2017

    Thanks for the comments. I think I've forgotten what my "normal" songs sound like.

  • @aerlyn Feb 2017

    Thanks for your kind comment on "Ariadne"!

  • @ajna1960  Feb 2017

    No worries at all about the 'fav' tag button thingy 😀

  • @ajna1960  Feb 2017

    I ADORE what you have done with Ebonfyre 😀 It's great 😀 Thank you so much 😀

  • @rops  Feb 2017

    Thanks for the feedback on the song! Glad you enjoyed it. What's funny is I just started with the "They say..." and started making up words. The theme started to tumble out after once I realized I had something to say. Funny how that happens, eh?

  • @rayboneor  Feb 2017

    Thanks for the comment. That song DOES sound different, but it didn't start out that way. Somewhere I have the original version, which sounds more like me. Maybe I'll dust it off if I'm desperate to make 14. I'm looking forward to following your entire narrative arc this year

  • @metalfoot  Feb 2017

    Dear sir, you are far too kind. Ideally, I'd know more to say to such a lovely comment as yours. 😀

  • @popmythology  Feb 2017

    Absolutely, you most definitely do stay true to your creative vision (as you should!). It's one of the things I consistenly appreciate about your work. As for more lyrics from me, i dunno... There's so much going on right now that i already feel like my creative mojo for this month is spent. Bleh. But one never knows so we'll see. I do hope a "God in the Sea" demo gets done, though! I'm quite attached to it. 😀

  • @hoppiern  Feb 2017

    Thanks so much for your kind comments on "Starting". I appreciate the feedback. 😊

  • @tamsnumber4  Feb 2017

    Thanks for listening to "Underneath the Tree", I am glad it made you feel happy!

  • @klaus  Feb 2017

    Thanks for listening Do You Wanna Rock ( Live!). Glad you liked it.

  • @tamsnumber4  Feb 2017

    Thanks for visiting "Nightmare of My Dreams", I appreciate your time and comments!

  • @benbarden  Feb 2017

    Thanks for the comment on Saturday Groove! 😀

  • @vaticanvamps14 Feb 2017

    Thank you for your kind comment. You described perfectly what I was going for in that song. So I was very encouraged by your words. Peace and Love

  • @yam655  Feb 2017

    Congratulations for making it to the Century Club!

    Thanks for reminding me about Century Club. I thought I added everyone when I made my last change, but we're at a point where people are reaching it really fast. I go offline to make a song, sleep and work and suddenly there's a bunch more. 😀 (It's a good problem to have.)

  • @kovbleu  Feb 2017

    Thanks for listening to "Sever" and leaving such nice feedback! Yeah, probably my first "anthemic" chorus - so that's fun. I could totally hear a crowd sing-along on that one!

  • @silentkid  Feb 2017

    Thanks a lot for your comment on "Order 23"! At first I intended to write much more lyrics on it, but nothing really worked, so I went with those two lines, and sometimes less is more apparently 😀

  • @gentlemanrocker  Feb 2017

    Thanks for your comment. And I really dig the Title of the concept album!

  • @jessicagraae  Feb 2017

    Great to see you again on FAWM. Thanks so much for your kind comments. "The cell phone tower who wanted to be a tree"? That's hilarious!

  • @rosieposy8 Feb 2017

    thank you for your listen and kind comment! Looking forward to hearing more about the phone tower who wanted to be a tree!

  • @metalfootlings Feb 2017

    It was indeed an improvisation-- glad you liked it!

  • @reisupstudio  Feb 2017

    Thank you for your comment! I will get to those demos!

  • @magicturtle643 Feb 2017

    Thanks so much for your comments and interest in my music! I hope you at least like some of it 😝

  • @radicalmguy  Feb 2017

    Wow, thanks a ton for the super positive comment, I really appreciate it!

  • @chriddof  Feb 2017

    Cheers very much for the comment!

  • @reisupstudio  Feb 2017

    Nutmegger here, just posted two, lyrics only. I got to it!

  • @jwhanberry  Feb 2017

    Thanks for your comments on "Choose Love". @kahlo2013 wrote a good lyric. Her rhythms seem to bring out the music in me. Another commenter liked the lo-fi as well. I hear it more as an older Nashville style waltz. When I have time I'll make a demo like that.

  • @thefuneralcrasher  Feb 2017

    Thank you 😀 It was initially only three verses and no chorus...so i had to expand it a lot and found it a little difficult to keep the narrative focused...i'm very pleased you found it worked ok.

  • @aprilm Feb 2017

    Thanks for your lovely comment on What We Love! It was a pleasure to collaborate with Kristi

  • @cheslain  Feb 2017

    Thank you very much for your comments, they made my day. It's very inspiring and pleasing to know someone's is looking forward to hear how the story unfolds. I'll make sure to give your songs a good listen as well.

  • @atitlan Feb 2017

    Thanks for your comments. The octets are really a learning exercise; I'm not about to give up writing pop songs any time soon (though they may end up with more interesting instrumentation as a result)

  • @spinhead  Feb 2017

    So glad you liked "Something Fishy." It's encouraging to get such enthusiastic feedback from someone who's a fan of that sort of stuff.

  • @vegansongs Feb 2017

    Thank you fro your comment, Odilon. I see my grandkids tomorrow and will play Pillow Planet for them!

  • @kahlo2013  Feb 2017

    Thanks for following my songs and some of my life's more complex thoughts over the past year. Love and life are complex and I find thinking through things in lyrics much more affordable and fun than I imagine therapy would be! Those two songs are directly related in the evolution of an almost relationship that never could have or should have been that you listened to in flipped flopped order, yep my heart is dripping off my sleeve this FAWM! 🙃

  • @popmythology  Feb 2017

    Yeah, if only! An animated short would be so awesome! But I'd be happy if someone just wanted to record it, even. You make a good point about the explicit reference and that it pulled you out of the fun of the song. I might tweak those lines so that it's less era specific. Cthulhu rules all eras, all time!

  • @fuzzy  Feb 2017

    Thanx for the comment on Barfight. Nope, not written out in advance at all - just pulled it out of my head.

  • @meriamber  Feb 2017

    Thank you for dropping by and leaving such a lovely comment on my song!! I'm looking forward to hearing the EP too 😝 As well as your concept album!!

  • @popmythology  Feb 2017

    Oh, thanks for asking! No, I'm not selling PopMythology.com, at least I hope I don't have to. I don't have much but it's one of the things I do have and that I can be proud of so, no, I'll hold onto it for as much and as long as I can. I... fell for a scam on Flippa that involved buying a website with a "proven" monthly income stream (something that Pop Mythology unfortunately does not have). I didn't spend a fortune on it or anything but it was still a very big sum for me, about two months of groceries' worth that came from money my mom had sent me (cue guilty music), and then later when I found out my mom had cancer the guilt was even more excruciating (cue even guiltier music). The "proven" income stream of the site in question seemed to be well documented but there was a trick to it that I didn't catch onto until too late. The whole thing was such a stupid, stupid mistake - so stupid that it's hard to talk about because it's too humiliating. I *know* that I'm supposed to know better, but the mistake was made out of fear and desperation when I knew my disability case was about to get rejected by SSA. And now I'm paying the price of letting desperation dictate my decision-making process. Never, never again. That's why I tell people to be careful on Flippa unless they know what they're doing (I clearly didn't), because I know there are other struggling people on there looking for ways to earn income and the scammers exploit that. (Sorry if that was too much information!)

  • @cts  Feb 2017

    You ready?

  • @ajna1960  Feb 2017

    Hey Odilon ! Brrrse declined on the collab for the battle lord, so ive added you in, hope thats ok. There is no hurry what so ever 😎
    Thank you

  • @atitlan Feb 2017

    Thanks for the comment.Always nice to defy expectations 😀

  • @enzo231 Feb 2017

    I love the Ackbar sample...I mean, that's gold! The whole jam is great, especially for SW nerds. Which I am not. I swear.

    Can't wait to hear what's next!