Just a guy with a guitar
|#2||Love is Patient||
|#3||The Sun Has Gone Away||
|#4||The Cloud Of Unknowing||
|#5||You Can't Make Someone Love You||
|#6||I'll be better for sure||
|#7||Dream # 10||
|#8||When I Look Into Your Eyes||
|#9||Why Do I Have To Be Alone||
|#10||Did You Notice?||
Thanks for your kind comments on my lyrics! Glad I managed to stir some emotion, that’s always the aim
I really love your style. This one reminds me of Bob Dylan, whom I greatly admire.
Thanks for the comment on "Again the night". You've written quite a few poetic songs, Little White Crow from 50/90 was poetic. The crow worked as a symbol, and a metaphor, and at the end of the song you were the little white crow. That was poetic. Symbolism, and metaphor, are literary tricks, that use imagery to represent things. It's just practice really. I've always loved songs with loads of imagery in them, so I just started copying those types of songs, and it's practice. There's a quite sweet moocs course on Coursera, for free, called Sharpened Visions, you can just learn the tricks. Once you know the tricks it comes easier. Here's a link if you want to try it. https://www.coursera.org/learn/poetry...
Thanks for the comment on Future. Don't worry about no words today, I'm sure some will come tomorrow.
Hey welcome. Happy FAWM2018. So, you live on a boat? Very cool if so? I almost did that once... then got married... never gonna happen now 😀 vhahhh.
Have a good month!! <3
Welcome! Great to have you joining us. 😀