Second year on FAWM 😀 I haven't written many finished songs since last FAWM so can't wait to get started and see if i can get creative again! I just write down what I observe and feel, i have never been taught so not sure I'm using any proper techniques ha! Feedback welcome.
I am open to collaborating, and can hopefully find some wonderful people to bring my lyrics to life! Unfortunately I can't play any musical instrument so focus solely on lyrics.
I bought a keyboard at Christmas though so determined to make it happen (and maybe even introduce it next year).
|#1||A Storm Overdrawn||
|#2||Cause it’s been 9 years “Dad”||
|#4||‘Cause It’s Been Nine Years “Dad” @colgoo||
|#5||My Darkest Friend||
|#6||The Movies Spinning on the Reel||
|#8||From Heaven to These Lonely Isles||
You are very welcome! An
d I forgot other people could see it. Dangit. I try to keep much buried.
Thank you very much for the comment on the duett! Glad you liked it!
Thank you! I don't know if these code songs will have lyrics. They are for a cd that will be "Kaleidoscope" That being said, I'm also writing one that is centered around synesthesia. I never know what I'll do next. I am mostly a guitar/ mandolin guy... but I also play bass and a bunch of other stuff...
Oh yay! So happy you don't hate it! I'll take insanely cool and unique 😁 Thanks again Jorh for letting me do it!
Great thank you Jorh! I had to make tiny changes to lines to make them fit, hope it's ok! Will try record tonight 😀
Hey jorh! I am working on Scars now. Shall I send it before I upload??
I LOVE trying to help make Fawmlings feel welcome their first year because people made me feel welcome my first year as well. Good to see you back this year. Good luck and above all have fun!!!
Thanks so much for your kind words about my skirmish song I Never Saw it Coming! Glad you got a keyboard. Playing keyboard has brought me a lot of joy.
Thanks so much for the comments no my tune. Yeah it was a massively fun one to do.
I'm glad you liked my interpretation! Keep writing. You are a gem!
Great, thank you Jorh, I might give it a go if you don't mind 😀
Welcome back and thanks for the nice comment on Faces.
Thanks for your kind words on Stay the Night!
Thanks so much for your comments Johr!
Thanks for your kind words on my songs! 😀
Thank you so much for your kind comment on I am nobodys child<3
Well....I don't do words, so someone will let me know that they want to do it. I often have that happen. Thanks for the nice comment!
I’ll upload separately as I might change a few lyrics, depending on the outcome. It’s great write! You should be proud of it!
I only need your email if you want to hear the song before it is posted. Haim and I have worked together before, so I sent him the sketch and am waiting for his response.
Just came across a cool quote that makes a similar point to your Scars song: “When you really listen to another person from their point of view, and reflect back to them that understanding, it's like giving them emotional oxygen.” ― Stephen Covey
I’ve made a sketch of your “9 years” song. Shoot me an email and we can talk about a collaboration. I actually think it would be cool to take my ideas and send them to @haim for the final product because he could deliver them with male vocals and rock it out with better guitar playing and drums. If I performed this, I would change a couple words to fit a female vocalist. (I’d change “son” to “dear” and “child”).
Hey! Thanks for such nice feedback!
Thanks for the kind words on Mike Pence.
Thank you for the great comment on my Dylan dream song!
Thanks for your comment on Future. That was a bit of an experiment for me, so good to get feedback on it. Your lyrics look very good, so hope it goes well with learning that keyboard. Being able to turn the lyrics into a song yourself is a very interesting experience.
Hello friend! Yes, Paper boats is from something my late husband used to say - and I thought this was the best way to let him go. Happy FAWM.
Thanks for your comment on "New Heart Of Steel"....Music soon!!!
Thanks for your comments on Evening Echo!
Thanks for your comments on 'Shadows are Coming" 😀
Thank you so much for your encouragement. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Keep writing, and keep laughing.
Good luck with FAWM.