I'm an amateur songwriter / musician. FAWM is just for fun for me. I'm not in any bands and never play live so I really appreciate the community here where I can at least get a small audience to listen to the stuff I record.

I'm open to constructive criticism on my songs. Mostly interested in suggestions for song structure (for example: don't repeat the chorus at the end; maybe add another verse; the bridge really doesn't work). I don't have a lot of time to record and I'm not a great guitarist or singer so telling me the guitar playing is bad or that my singing sucks won't do me much good since I don't have access to anyone else to do that for me -- unless you want to volunteer