factarytale 13

@factorytale

Denmark   Feb 2


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let the music speak for itself.

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  • @fearlessflight2014  Mar 12

    Thanks so much for your kind comments on my song. I'm really glad you liked it!

  • @gvgeis Mar 7

    Thanks for your listen and comments on Little Star! I really liked working on it, and am glad that you liked it. 😀

  • @matthew62  Mar 6

    Thanks for your kind comments on East of Eden.

  • @leepat  Mar 6

    yep, it's me alright. me, myself and I 😀

  • @jamkar  Mar 6

    Ha Ha! When you get some recording gear, I would love to collaborate on said melody!

  • @leepat  Mar 6

    Hey, Heidi, thanks for the comments. A duet would be nice! And if you like vocal shapeshifters, you might enjoy Middle of the Bed too 😀

  • @cindyrella  Mar 3

    Thanks for your comments and yes, Marthie did Are You Out There. However, if you want to give it a try, go ahead. It is fun sometimes to have other versions.

  • @aerlyn Mar 2

    Just added you as a collaborator for Heartbreak On A Wire Fence 😀

  • @aerlyn Mar 2

    Awesome! You can contact me via e-mail on my soundboard. I'll be looking forward to it 😀

  • @aerlyn Mar 2

    If you just want to do music, I can re-record new vocals on top of your track for these:
    Jump In The Water http://fawm.org/songs/72887/
    Open Sea Jealousy http://fawm.org/songs/74496/

    I didn’t list “Heartbreak on a Wire Fence” as open for collab, but I think it suits your girl-with-piano/girl-with-guitar style. If you’d like to, of course. http://fawm.org/songs/73549/

    “Have A Nice Life” is my personal favorite and I am looking for people who can either sing or do an instrumental or both. Bear in mind, it’s a duet, so we’d need another singer to complete the song! http://fawm.org/songs/74568/

    Let me know what you think! Those are just my suggestions, and thanks for checking out Master Key anyway.

  • @aerlyn Mar 1

    What did you have in mind? @bearclawbill already did an EDM-punk version, but I wouldn't mind hearing your interpretation!

  • @ihelen  Mar 1

    Thanks for commenting on my Dreamless song! At some point, I'm going to have to learn some more about the vocal aspect of music production. I get what you're saying about the vocals though. 😀

  • @aerlyn Mar 1

    Hey, if you're looking for songs to collaborate, I have a few open! Just poke around my list, and if anything interests you, give me a shout 😀

  • @w1n Mar 1

    Thanks for the comment on Seraphine, there's actually a version with vocals here btw http://fawm.org/songs/71793/

  • @ajna1960  Mar 1

    @factorytale There was already a 'Turn The Page' song posted 😀 I had made you collab on it 😀
    What you could/should have done was to add the demo to that Song Post, rather than create a second one 😀 http://fawm.org/myfawm/
    Not that it matters really, as I don't mind 2, just changes the song count and quiet a few people do it lol Just maybe will help you for next year 😀
    Could you do me a favour and also add it to the original song I posted in the above link ? Thanks 😀

  • @ajna1960  Mar 1

    Hi there 😀 No you are fine with it on YouTube 😀 What a fun song - thank you 😀

  • @ajna1960  Feb 28

    Added you to Turn The Page !

  • @johncrossman  Feb 28

    Hm, thanks for the note. My googling of cobber rings came up with a specific class ring for one college, which can't be right, so I think you're saying it's something specific to you or your family or region. That's cool, no problem.

    Yeah, on connecting the rings to the birds and the kite... I get where they come in. The rings are tying the narrator down, the birds and kite of course, symbols of freedom, a.k.a. flight. I was thinking she's looking out at the birds but she's not actually going to jump on a kite because humans can't do that. One thought I had, take it or leave it, is that the bird has rings too (as some birds do) and she's trading in her chain rings for the free rings of the bird. Or even if there's a kite out there with the bird that she sees and wants to be. A link between reality and the metaphor. Just my 2 cents worth as a song listener to help the listener make that leap in the story.

    Anyway, glad to see you posted again!

  • @ihelen  Feb 28

    Thanks for commenting on my Spring song! We're both in the northern hemisphere, so Spring will be here soon! 😀

  • @kahlo2013  Feb 28

    I would defer to your musical sensibilty but when I wrote it I was hearing something like Ani DiFranco or Traci Chapman - alternatively I could see something like Norah Jones

  • @kahlo2013  Feb 28

    That's not what I meant
    That's the way

    Are both more rock and could be much more driving if you want that style

  • @kahlo2013  Feb 28

    True Purpose of You
    Mixed Emotions
    Oceans of Poetry
    Beauty of You
    I think could be good....and I am very very flexible with style - whatever you think would be good will be great! There are others too if you want a different kind of lyric like love and ice

  • @kahlo2013  Feb 28

    I would love that!!!! Any genre?

  • @sheilerk  Feb 28

    Hey, lady, you're sideways!! Just kidding. Nice to meet you on fawm. Just listened to one of your songs. I'll be listening to another shortly. Glad you joined us in the musical sandbox!

  • @gentlemanrocker  Feb 27

    thanks for once again visiting and commenting on one of my Songs.

  • @ustaknow Feb 25

    I saw you cleaned house, -- hope all is OK... and just a preference. I get that. All the stuff gets deleted next January anyway, but your acct stays.

    Also, FYI, there's an Archive feature here, under your ID icon... copies all songs and comments to your local, well, whatever you copy to, USB stick if don't have a PC.

    All the best!

  • @gemhughs Feb 20

    Thank you for your comments on "Better World".

  • @davewermers  Feb 20

    Thanks for your nice comments on my song "Barbed Wire".

  • @lhcisco  Feb 18

    Hey! Here's my girl Joan Wasser AKA Joan as Police Woman that I was talkin' about: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LfXqJ...

  • @footprintsonthemoon Feb 17

    Thx for nice comments on my ambient project!

  • @robinkirby Feb 16

    great songs I enjoyed listening!

  • @sheamiejay  Feb 16

    I guess it could be a Christian song if you replaced Kwai Chang Kaine with Jesus. Only the rice paper part wouldn't fit. Thanks for listening!

  • @gentlemanrocker  Feb 16

    Hi there, thanks for your Comment on my Song "Break of Dawn".

  • @jesstherockstar Feb 16

    @factorytale Hey thank you for commenting on my song Remember! I'm up for the cafe idea!! 😀

  • @konstisifyer  Feb 16

    Thank you for your comment on my song!

  • @pinky  Feb 16

    Yeah, I have a terrible ear for that kind of thing. I was more thinking about the feel, that mix of pain and swagger in Billie Holiday's voice. But now you make me want to listen to some Ella Fitzgerald and Sarah Vaughan and see if I can pick it out(:

  • @cynthiawolff  Feb 15

    No...not self-centered...that is when people don't have talent and they think they are the next Beyonce...your have a gift and a great voice..don't put yourself down...You Rawk

  • @krayzie003  Feb 15

    Thanks for your comment. I think you might be right. A little less echo in the beginning. I'll have to work on that after FAWM

  • @bong Feb 14

    Det tror jeg ikke.

  • @inger Feb 14

    Tak for kommentaren på min Trees sang 😀 Jeg har slet ikke fået hørt sange den sidste uge (har været syg), så jeg må til at i gang. Jeg hørte lige din Hey Adele som det første, og den er fantastisk. Fedt at få den modsatte vinkel, og virkelig flot sunget også

  • @bong Feb 14

    Godt gået.

  • @tabulhas07 Feb 14

    Thanks for the positive comment on immortal means more than you know!

  • @visiblydistorted Feb 14

    I guess "The Faerie Knight" could be slam poetry, not sure exactly, I just tried to copy the meter and foot of the original poem and give it a bit of melody. I will be updating that one when I have the energy to do it, I left it hanging in a wanting way 😁 More fun to be had!

  • @shannonwinnonah Feb 13

    Im not sure the Craig list men were funny that night haha!!

  • @marthie Feb 13

    Thank you for your feedback on Lullabye for the awaken ones

  • @visiblydistorted Feb 13

    Hey, "The Faerie Knight" didn't load properly on soundcloud last night but I fixed it this morning when after 6 hours it was still "Being processed" I just deleted it and uploaded again 😀 If you were curious to listen, it's now ready for ya!

  • @kenjku  Feb 11

    Thanks for the comment on Seconds. I actually did have a finger picked version just stuck with the strumming to simplify it more I guess.

  • @ustaknow Feb 10

    Hello!, all the best this new FAWM year! 😀
    -- And, neither "stupid nor self centered"... quite nice actually; great work, what I've had a chance to review so far!

    I saw your other forum post, -- yes "this" is it... make it what you want. This my second, and did the "5090" later this year... some of the online dialogues have been great... "relationships", maybe over time, such as the inet may be.

  • @chandra83  Feb 9

    Thanks for your comments on "Despair" 😀

  • @rbmarty000 Feb 9

    You should be able to download it.. if not here is the link. thanks again.

    http://song.space/2dc974

  • @rbmarty000 Feb 9

    Thanks for you compliments.. You're up to 10 songs already... wow..

  • @kahlo2013  Feb 8

    Thank you for busting my zong! And rest assured that I wasn't insulting my fellow FAWMers! I need to check out some of your work!

  • @misterd Feb 8

    Thanks for your kind words .

  • @julesbf  Feb 7

    Thank for your comments on 'Save me'. My FAWM pieces this year are all based on my research subject and not personal experience thankfully 😀

  • @tsunamidaily Feb 7

    thanks for commenting on "door or the couch." i hope you are having fun this year!

  • @sayda Feb 6

    love your voice! it has a nice timbre... and digging the songs! I also record when the kiddies are sleeping 😁