Influences: hair metal, Wheat, musicals, comedy, 80's pop, fake music, movies
Musician and songwriter in a basement near DC. Bassist/Synth for the band Sam Cooper & the Sleepwalkers. Some session work for independent singers, filmmakers, and podcasters.
Thanks for your comments on my DNA song! It is so fascinating, isn't it? Yes, go ahead and fix the structure. I overlooked that part.
Oh.. The structure is A - A instrumental A - A .. the hot line is repeated differently at the beginning and end of each verse but as for a repeating and different melody and lyric, typical of a chorus, then I would say it didn't have one. Hooky line yes but chorus not in my opinion.
Wow thanks so much for the feedback.. truly super analysis. I am not an engineer and just did some loops of piano, bass and drums to get it out. The middle I thought should be similar but bring in the feeling of stress and heat. Not sure if that came across>
I used a technique to get the idea by taking the first line of one book chosen randomly with the last of another, and then making a story from the two. Mine was mountains and heat.
Like musicals too. Had one 3/4 written but then someone took my subject and made "Come From Away" so we stopped.. They are rich now. oh well