cicpisces 23


  6 weeks

Artist Bio

Influences:   Aimee Mann, Alison Moyet, Texas, Annie Lennox, Prince, Maria Taylor, George Michael, Scissor Sisters

I'm a lyricist enjoying the creative process. Nothing gives me more pleasure than planting lyrics in a song and watching it blossom.


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  • @tiller2  2 weeks

    Hi, in case I find performance use, etc. for "Ghost," would you share with me your name and email? My email is linked via my profile page. No problem if you prefer to be "Anonymous." Hope to see you next year.

  • @tsunamidaily 2 weeks

    i am sorry i haven't completed the adaptation of your lyrics. i have gotten so swamped of late it has left me paralyzed. i am working on it, but it is not as fast as i had hoped. please forgive me, but it might not be done until after FAWM. i apologize wholeheartedly.

  • @tiller2  2 weeks

    Glad you like it!

  • @tiller2  2 weeks

    Hi there, I didn't have your email so I posted the tune for Ghost. I hope you like it (if you don't you can take it down). Sorry for my inexpert, rushed production and lack of drums. I'd like to do a more careful version, with drums...

  • @tiller2  2 weeks

    Hi, would you mind if I made a few small lyric changes to fit the rhythm better? To wit:

    Forgetting is the dream
    To stop the hurt and all the pain
    I'll be healed when I don't hear screams
    And don't see you again

    Can’t keep me in the past
    I see clearly at last
    ’Cause your time has past
    now I'll get the last laugh

  • @jibbidy34  2 weeks

    Congratulations Centurion Soldier! You wrote 100 comments for your fellow FAWMers!! You made this place even better. You took your time to listen to other people's songs and you have 100 thank you's from all of them and from me! Here’s your badge. Excellent work and keep busting’ those zongs!!

  • @seb 2 weeks

    did you hear collab yet?

  • @seb 3 weeks


  • @seb 3 weeks

    Im locked out of the song. Pls unlock or delete.

  • @seb 3 weeks

    Will post our collab in next few days, outlined the song, just needs a little practice

  • @seb 3 weeks

    Will post our collab in next few days, outlined the song, just needs a little practice

  • @tiller2  3 weeks

    congrats on your win! I'm gonna have to wait till Monday to record the track, because of non-fawm obligations. but it will get done! srry!

  • @tiller2  3 weeks

    hi, fyi, I'm back from vacation and will spend most of tomorrow on music for our collab. cheers.

  • @seb 3 weeks

    thanks, can you remove hindsight pls?

  • @tsunamidaily 3 weeks

    Hey there. I’m your newest collab partner. How do you want to do this? Do you have a certain set of lyrics you want realized as music? Hit me back.

  • @seb 3 weeks

    Hey there, sorry, nothing has come to me with the lyrics. 😞
    Have other ones? 😀

  • @meadows  3 weeks

    Thank you so much for lyrics for "Cathedral". Marije wrote lyrics a couple of days ago, and I already started to record the vocals. What shall we do with your version of the song?

  • @scubed  4 weeks

    Thanks for your nice comment on "Better Angels"!

  • @tiller2  4 weeks

    Hi, just to let you know, I'm away for six days at a (cold-weather) vacation place, where I can work on our collab but don't have my home studio to record multi-track. I do have a microcassette recorder, but it would probably be best to record the full version when I get back on Wednesday. I hope that schedule is okay with you. Cheers.

  • @stuartbenbow  4 weeks

    Wow, done already, congratulations! Thanks for checking out So Glad You're Mine. Glad you enjoyed it.

  • @nuj4x 4 weeks

    Thanks for your comment on "Wink Wink" 😁 the vocal effect there is to disguise my actual voice. You know, since I wear a mask and stuff lol

  • @tiller2  4 weeks

    Thanks, lyric looks good. I'm traveling today but will respond more soon.

  • @tiller2  4 weeks

    Hi. Yes, excellent. Send lyrics anytime. I look forward to working with you and checking out your songs.

  • @wistah  4 weeks

    Hi @cicpisces, let's do it! Probably work best for me if you send me lyrics. Anything that fits with the style. If you have a melody in mind, maybe you can hum or sing a scratch track for me and send it to me. my email is Thanks!

  • @erbaer  4 weeks

    Hey there...I finally got a chance to do some recording and got the collaboration done. Sorry it took so long. Great lyrics.

  • @benjaminnolan 5 weeks

    I totally agree re: the lyrics comment, though unfortunately I don't have a female vocalist to hand, and I sound like Elton John. ;_; Thanks for the comment, though--glad you liked it!

  • @jonmeta  5 weeks

    Thank you so much for listening to "Count on Lonely". I'm encouraged.

  • @seb 5 weeks

    Hi I cant see anything when I click on Hindsight for the collab

  • @karlsburg25  5 weeks

    Thanks for your comments on my daffodil song. Yeah i know what you mean about an Anne reference but as i was singing it in an imagined way that I was her, It didn't really lend itself to that.

  • @mkd  5 weeks

    Thanks for your comment on Hurt Song, really appreciate it!

  • @jendistad  5 weeks

    Hi cispisces. I just wanted to drop you a quick word of encouragement! You are doing great! (You have 8 songs posted as I write this on the 8th.) In something like this, there are bound to be times where the energy flags and times when you'r bursting at the seems with it. When you find yourself flagging, don't let that drag you down. You've still got this! You can doooo eeeeeet! (=

  • @erbaer  5 weeks

    Okay..there they are! Thanks.

  • @erbaer  5 weeks

    Hey there... How's it going? I don't know if you have lyrics up or not. I can't access them. If you don' worries. But I can't see or edit a non-public page even if I am listed as a collab.

  • @pamgrisham 5 weeks

    Hi! Thank you so much for your encouraging comment on The Real Thing.

  • @erbaer  6 weeks

    You can still place-hold the title... then send me the lyrics at my email.

  • @erbaer  6 weeks

    I just looked. The collaboration option is a drop down menu... the first option is [ --none-- ] is right under the Weekly Challenge and above the the downloadable option

  • @erbaer  6 weeks

    You bring up your song page and go into the 'edit'...the collaboration option is near the bottom, I think.

  • @erbaer  6 weeks

    And if someone else tries to put music to your words later on it will be yet another song to your credit.

  • @erbaer  6 weeks

    Yes, I see it. You should unmark it as a collaboration on your list. That way you get credit for the writing. I will mark it as a collaboration when I post it with music. You, then will get a second song credit towards the month's goal.

  • @erbaer  6 weeks

    Wait. You don't have to post it twice. You just post your lyric as your own song. ...I'm the one who posts it as a collaboration.

  • @erbaer  6 weeks

    If what you're working on is not a complete lyric and you want to toss it back and forth a bit, then send what you have to

  • @erbaer  6 weeks

    Do you want to post your lyrics as a song here? That way the collaboration counts as a second song. You would get two songs out of the deal. I should warn you that I edit and amend lyrics if it seems needed. But I try to dd that carefully.

  • @erbaer  6 weeks

    Hey there. I'm Eric...your new random collaboration pal. What ever shall we do with this opportunity?
    I have done collaborations before but they're still new to me. Let's see what we got.

  • @jcameron 6 weeks

    Thanks for the appreciation. "Quirky" is my middle name ... I did try recording without the tempo changes at first, but it just wasn't working ... I'm utterly incapable of singing about getting caffeined up and conquering demons at the laid-back tempo the rest of the song calls for. Sorry!

  • @jcameron 6 weeks

    OK, I've put a demo up for Pot of Coffee. Hope you think it's OK.

  • @jcameron 6 weeks

    Hi again! I think I may have come up with a tune for Pot of Coffee. Want me to have a go at recording a demo?

  • @karlsburg25  6 weeks

    Yeah i have do have some ideas tucked away. I will get some ideas over to you over the weekend, its all a bit hectic and i haven't even thought about FAWM yet, but i am slowly being sucked in again

  • @jcameron 6 weeks

    Hi there! If you're responding to a comment somebody left on a song of yours, you should leave your response on their soundboard not on the song page to make sure they see it. What with the number of songs being posted people often don't have time to check back on songs they've already commented on.

    I used to drink coffee like crazy but I sort of stopped a year or so ago and moved over entirely to tea. Anwyay, maybe mellow folk-rock for the verses and a harder-driving rock feel for the caffeinated refrain? mmm, Caffeinated Refrain sounds like a good name for a band 😀